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Adebayo Owoeye

Nice song and beats. Thumbs up...May God continue to grant you more grace. 

  

David Osokolo

‎1. This is a Brave and Committed expression of your mÙsiÇal passion 

2. It is Very rich with words and not 'boringly' repetitive like some music out there 

3. You are 'ON KEY' from beginning to end. This is what I love the most

4. The CD cover is really beautifully designed HOWEVER,

5. The beats are bland - lacking finese, maybe this is a pre-mastery production. 

6. Some of the words could have been better placed or rhymed in. Brainstorm and Re-read the script to check for better prose. 

7. Check your Genre. Are you sure you are comfortable on 'Soft Rock' music? There are 'tired points' of your voice during singing. I would suggest you practice several Genres before settling on any major one(of course, you can always sing anyone, anytime).

8. 'SMILEY' always connotes joy, smiles, fresh air to me. I think your photos should express that too.. That said, I must commend your effort. Although there is room for improvement, this is a great step forward and a real good job done! Kudos